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bukowski on lowry

3:41696 summary words · ~3 min readEnglishBy Duarte HarrisTranscribed Sep 22, 2026
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Summary

Prose must deliver relentless, self-contained vitality in every single sentence rather than relying on tedious atmospheric buildup or the tragic mythology of the suffering alcoholic artist.

It strips away literary pretension and romanticized self-destruction, establishing that artistic worth is measured strictly by kinetic impact on the page rather than authorial biography.

Section summaries

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Critique of Lowry and the 'Bim Bim' Aesthetic

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Bukowski responds to an inquiry regarding Malcolm Lowry's novel 'Under the Volcano' by claiming it put him straight to sleep. He argues that conventional writers lack pace, quickness, sunlight, and life because they spend excessive time painting leisurely backdrops, such as flies crawling on a porch chair. This elaborate scaffolding promises a grand emotional payoff that ultimately fails to materialize. He contrasts this lethargic style with his own ideal: rapid, punchy sentences that hit like steady percussive beats and compel the reader to keep turning pages.

  • Malcolm Lowry's celebrated novel is dismissed as dull and deficient in narrative velocity.
  • Leisurely scene-setting is a false promise that drains emotional momentum.
  • Prose must possess a musical, percussive cadence ('Bim Bim Bim') that drives reader curiosity.

It contains Bukowski's core artistic manifesto on prose rhythm and immediate aesthetic engagement.

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The Atomic Age and Autonomous Sentences

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Bukowski asserts that the contemporary era—the atomic age—demands a prose style radically distinct from past literary traditions. Every single line of text must exist as an autonomous entity packed with its own internal energy, flavor, and emotional juice. He mocks mundane exposition by creating an absurd parody of Southern regional writing involving Mrs. McGillicuddy sitting in a chair on a Georgia morning. To Bukowski, such passive descriptive padding is already dead on the page, and the author must instead present the essential thing without ornamental delay.

  • Modern literature must match the accelerated reality of the atomic era.
  • Every single sentence must stand alone as a vital, potent statement rather than mere narrative connective tissue.
  • Mundane domestic logistics and temporal stage-setting represent dead, obsolete writing.

This section explains Bukowski's concrete criteria for sentence-level editing and stylistic urgency.

2:00-3:00

Demolishing the Romance of Alcoholic Martyrdom

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The interviewer points out that Lowry died of alcoholism and asks if Bukowski is confusing him with William Faulkner, whom Bukowski promptly labels another of the worst practitioners. Bukowski dismantles the romantic trope of the self-destructive literary martyr, declaring that drinking oneself to death does not make dull prose good. He comically critiques Lowry's fatal alcohol poisoning, arguing that a true veteran drinker knows to position their head over the mattress edge to avoid aspirating vomit. Bukowski dismisses Lowry as incompetent even at being a drunk, before urging the interviewer to drop the formal interview posture and share a glass of Scotch.

  • A tragic death from alcoholism provides zero artistic validation for mediocre literature.
  • William Faulkner is categorized alongside Lowry as an exemplar of unreadable, over-padded writing.
  • Romantic bohemian suffering cannot substitute for leaving powerful, electrically charged words on the page.

It offers an iconic, humorous demystification of the romanticized tragic artist myth.

Key points

  • Kinetic Pace Over Atmospheric Exposition — Bukowski condemns writers who leisurely set up a scene with mundane details like flies on a porch chair, arguing they promise a grand emotion that never arrives. Writing must instead advance with immediate, rapid-fire impact where each line carries flavor and power.
  • Autonomous Vitality in the Atomic Age — In the modern era, prose cannot afford Victorian or Southern gothic pacing; every individual sentence must function as a self-sufficient entity carrying its own distinct energy and juice. Filler lines that merely state mundane logistical facts kill narrative momentum before it begins.
  • The Myth of Tragic Alcoholic Genius — Romanticizing an author's fatal addiction is an evasion of craft standards, as dying of alcohol poisoning or choking on one's vomit does not retroactively redeem boring prose. The only legacy that matters is the concrete quality and electricity of the words left behind.
when you write your words must go like this Bim Bim Bim Bim Bim Bim Bim Bim Bim Bim Bim Bim each line must be full of a delicious little juice flavor Charles Bukowski
they're setting up the scene for the grand emotion and when they get to the Grand emotion there isn't any Charles Bukowski

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did you ever read uh Malcolm Lor's Under

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the Volcano yeah I did and I yawned

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myself to [ __ ] why why because like any

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other writer there's no Pace there's no

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quickness in his

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lines there's no life there's no

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sunlight when you write your words must

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go like this Bim Bim Bim Bim Bim Bim Bim

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Bim Bim Bim Bim Bim each line must be

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full of a delicious little juice flavor

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they must be full of power they must

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make you like to turn a page Bim Bim Bim

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what these guys do they say well in blah

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blah blah da da da there was a porch

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chair the Flies were walking around you

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see they're too

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leisurely they're setting up the scene

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for the grand emotion and when they get

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to the Grand emotion there isn't

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any this is a different age it's the

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atomic age each line must have its own

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power its own feeling its own juice its

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own

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flavor writing must never be boring it

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must not bore the reader the writer it

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must not bore anybody you have to have

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juice in each line don't you see you

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don't believe me but I'm trying to tell

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you I get

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so writers put me to sleep

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they always did they always will each

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line must be an entity unto

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itself but must carry its own like a

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vage juice you can't

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say Mrs mcgilla cutti was sitting in her

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chair it was 3:30 p.m. on a southern

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morning in

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Georgia Mr gillotti was this is all it's

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already dead you see you must

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say the thing the thing but he died from

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alcohol you're not afraid of are you

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thinking of

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Falconer no he was one of the worst

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practitioners of course but now I'm

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talking about Lori he died from

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alcohol oh yeah well it's nice to die of

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alcoholism it's very

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glorious but if you write dull [ __ ] it

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doesn't do any good what you die

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from you see

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alcohol is not a great thing because you

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die from alcohol doesn't mean you're any

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good you got to leave some words

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behind he died swallowing his own

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vomit

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great now it's not even a professional

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drunk when I really have a big drunk I

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put my head on the side of the mattress

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and let it like this so if I vomit it's

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just going to go to the floor

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this man's not even a [ __ ]

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professional

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drunk besides that it's a bad dull

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writing next

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question for Christ's sake do you have

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another

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question drink some more scotch

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[ __ ] it'll cheer you up enjoy

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yourself man forget there's an

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interview for I like you as a person by

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the way my buddy

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the Dutch interviewer from Belgium were

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tough men together through the horrors

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of life

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